tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post4714269215441728872..comments2023-12-17T13:58:42.727-05:00Comments on After Midnight: Episode 07: MiseryDaijahVhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-90031394574480203782012-09-24T22:42:18.040-04:002012-09-24T22:42:18.040-04:00It is one of the more ominous and scary feeling re...It is one of the more ominous and scary feeling reads for this story.<br /><br />Lol thank you! Rafe gave that poor fish a very unusual name as well as a horrible picture to have to look at in its home! But he seems to really care for his pet!<br /><br />Luther is very much an ass! No one stands a chance with him :(DaijahVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-68405444945443900522012-09-24T12:02:19.261-04:002012-09-24T12:02:19.261-04:00Okay, that was dark. Why did I still like it?
I l...Okay, that was dark. Why did I still like it?<br /><br />I like the goldfish Spike. LOL.<br /><br />Luther is an ass, but we all know that.mypalsim1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08612512921461620603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-58509715269961092032012-06-02T21:17:36.362-04:002012-06-02T21:17:36.362-04:00Thank you! He is a brute for sure.
HAHAHA I trie...Thank you! He is a brute for sure. <br /><br />HAHAHA I tried to imagine that then thought "ew that would be a turn off" so I imagined Rafe as being more respectful and careful with his stuff. Plus his career as a con man will have benefited best if he had a nice place to bring his conquests :P<br /><br />Your hubby's place sounds like Bane's room lol!DaijahVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-63597439398349380872012-06-01T14:02:52.749-04:002012-06-01T14:02:52.749-04:00You're dong a really excellent job of portrayi...You're dong a really excellent job of portraying Luther as a merciless beast.<br /><br />And I really loved the scene where Kaya was going through Rafe's apartment. I was surprised, too, by how neat and furnished it was. My husband is a musician of the rocker variety, and his apt before we got together...he had one chair to sit on, I kid you not. And a closet full of guitars, lol.yangthecathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15083940950118677312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-205874773311852482011-12-22T01:31:16.337-05:002011-12-22T01:31:16.337-05:00Zhip:
I realized Luther's behavior may have t...Zhip:<br /><br />I realized Luther's behavior may have that reaction and I wanted to be able to perfectly show the type of monster he is. Merciless and uncaring and what he did was a major act of violence but it paints a clear picture of the type of man everyone is dealing with.<br /><br />Thank you for reading!DaijahVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-42234408109282424062011-12-21T10:13:50.444-05:002011-12-21T10:13:50.444-05:00Powerful writing. I feel really ill.Powerful writing. I feel really ill.Zhippidyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12570869365967598793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-8767959480219130912011-12-19T22:09:20.492-05:002011-12-19T22:09:20.492-05:00Luther was not concerned at all about how she felt...Luther was not concerned at all about how she felt; in fact it only drove him to hurt her more! Thank you! I'm glad I was able to convey her emotions in this and the fear she felt being thrown to him by his pack. They only worried about their own asses and luckily the distraction paid off...for them.<br /><br />Kaya and Byron are cordial only because he knows she can further the life line of their kind. Though she has yet to mate she is capable of extending the kindred so he'll always go out of his way to ensure she's not harmed. He is a pretty nice guy, he loves women as he mentioned :P but he's also very lazy when it comes to "real work". <br /><br />Lobo took an extended leave of absence but he'll be back in 8 and you better believe Kaya will ask that same question and expect his answer! <br /><br />Thank you for reading! :)DaijahVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-10946283905252294082011-12-19T12:47:59.847-05:002011-12-19T12:47:59.847-05:00OMG O_O That was intense. Luther is a cruel, cr...OMG O_O That was intense. Luther is a cruel, cruel crazy ass psycho. Total shock factor there. You wrote it so well that me, as a reader, could totally feel the pain of what the girl was going through.<br />Very interesting Byron and Kaya's connection. Hmmm I wonder if he will turn to Greymane down the line? Maybe kill Luther in the process?<br />I like Rafe for Kaya but I'm kinda feeling Byron for her at this point as I love his background story. He seems like a good guy at heart just stuck in the wrong pack.<br />Where's Lobo. Still worrying about him and the reason behind his absence.<br />Great update and can't wait for next chap!Luv4gajhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17326130574805162429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-38678676226784640562011-12-17T03:45:28.452-05:002011-12-17T03:45:28.452-05:00Tommie:
YAY! You caught up :D Luther was certainl...Tommie:<br /><br />YAY! You caught up :D Luther was certainly driving the point home though it was more for his pleasure and watching her agony took his mind off of what his pack was failing to do (which was their plan in the first place). I don't think ANYONE would want to be on his bad side.<br /><br />His story will be explained and funny enough he was a very pleasant person before (hard to believe) everything happened and changed who he was and who he would become completely!<br /><br />HAHA You hate Bane! HA! Funny I love that he's hated even though he's in the "good" pack. He is the consummate bad guy and doesn't care about anyone or anything seemingly. Kaya cares about all of her wolves and the trash was hurting her nose (though she went there for something specific and could have easily just left...she felt compelled). Maybe that's just me...not a neat freak but I hate stink.<br /><br />HAHAHAHA Yes Ch. 9 :P I'm wondering if that will get picked up or becoming too much. Though I did warn everyone that sex would abound in this tale!<br /><br />Thank you for reading!DaijahVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-12531768752973935582011-12-17T03:14:50.003-05:002011-12-17T03:14:50.003-05:00WOW...that last scene was intense. Poor girl, ble...WOW...that last scene was intense. Poor girl, bleeding all over and he would't stop. I know Luther was trying to teach her a lesson, but DAMN. To mercilessly rape her and then mutilate her body?? Remind me not to piss him off. lol<br /><br />I also think it's interesting that the more pain he inflicts, the more excited he gets. Now I'm wondering what made him so evil. Mommy issues? Absent father? Molesty uncle?? *scratches head*<br /><br />I think it' so cute that Kaya cleaned up Rafe's apartment. She actually washed the dishes and fed his goldfish. SHE LIKES HIM, SHE LIKES HIM!! I'd love for Bane to catch them doing it, just to piss him off. XD<br /><br />Great update, and I totally thought about your number system. Can't wait for Ch. 9! XD<br /><br />YAY!! Now I'm all caught up!! *Happy Dance*tommiegirl_cahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04541107908741237375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-87858441028568336762011-12-15T09:13:01.080-05:002011-12-15T09:13:01.080-05:00JM:
I'm sure he would be willing :) but then ...JM:<br /><br />I'm sure he would be willing :) but then the question becomes would she want him to risk it?<br /><br />Aww! You psychic abilities are fun! Are they cute puppies? Or does one have a lame paw and drools all the time? (though puppy drool's not that bad).<br /><br />She does! The scent is unbearable when she's in heat. Luckily it's only one week so should pass soon!<br /><br />:O Luther won't like y'all trying to steal his wolves! Y'all better look out!<br /><br />HAHA But Luther would get hurt! You wouldn't want that would you? Yeah I suppose you would :P He does need someone to show him how bad he gives punishment. I wonder if he could deal!<br /><br />Mmmm Chase <---yes I totally sounded like Homer Simpson just now!<br /><br />Thank you for reading!DaijahVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-73400978103706336292011-12-15T08:52:09.103-05:002011-12-15T08:52:09.103-05:00Okay, now I'm commenting! Read it yesterday, c...Okay, now I'm commenting! Read it yesterday, couldn't comment (work was crazy)<br /><br />Quote: -She does need to find her someone but...No wolf would want to get involved in that!-<br />I know a wolf who would!!!<br /><br />Completely melted away at the Rafe touching Kaya's cheek picture! I see puppies in their future! How's that for my psychic abilities!!!<br /><br />Byronnnnnn~ I felt the heat! Only not hers! His! (although I must say "humping everything that moves" Not cool Byron, Not Cool!!!) She really drives them crazy doesn't she. Damn!<br /><br />Qui make that 2 votes for Byron to Greymane.<br /><br />Here's an idea! Let's combine our stories! I have a 3 vamp Elites that could easily show Luther the next level of cruel.........<br />DONE TO HIM!!!<br />Asshole...Jean-Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10197541538215744061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-24055112137558103032011-12-14T14:13:34.918-05:002011-12-14T14:13:34.918-05:00Qui:
Lol! Yes he was there :D HAHA I'm sure t...Qui:<br /><br />Lol! Yes he was there :D HAHA I'm sure they would both be ready and willing to take you up on that offer! Byron dislikes Greymane but not to the point of hurting a she-wolf. He'd never risk the future of his kind just to please his Alpha. <br /><br />No there was no way he was letting her escape him. He is a man of his word, he set her free. Which is his own demented definition. His pack knew that they could distract him by giving him the girl. They bought themselves some time to complete the task he had for them before they found themselves on the wrong end of Luther's fury.<br /><br />Lexi's bond runs deep with Kaya. She feels an overwhelming sense of protection for her and Greymane. It's not what the Council intended to happen with the seers they assigned to the houses but working side by side with these wolves for centuries tend to have a way of connecting people.<br /><br />Lol Byron would never jump ship. Besides if he did at this point Luther would gut him like a fish!<br /><br />LOL love the puns :D She does need to find her someone but with everything that's going on and the threats of her father that's nearly impossible. No wolf would want to get involved in that!<br /><br />Thank you for reading!DaijahVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-34869784257082267552011-12-14T13:26:09.442-05:002011-12-14T13:26:09.442-05:00I saw Red! I saw Red!!
Byron seems very interestin...I saw Red! I saw Red!!<br />Byron seems very interesting. He didn't want to hurt her and decided to protect her instead. Yes Ky, steal him and initiate him into Greymane! Although he and Red would probably fight over women. Never fear, I'm here to be all the woman he needs! :)<br /><br />Luther, man that was f'ed up! They threw that poor girl to him and not only did he brutalize her, he enjoyed it! It would have been too much like right for him to let her go.<br /><br />Lexi feels a bond with Ky because of what happened with her father? She's feeling a connection because she's tapping her Dad? weird! I wonder what she meant by that though!<br /><br />1 vote Byron for Greymane.<br /><br />Poor Ky, all the "hounds" trying to throw her a bone. I agree, she needs a mate before that option is taken from her.Qui.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00025642400085205427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-77588543943368764682011-12-14T11:21:03.319-05:002011-12-14T11:21:03.319-05:00Thank you El. Yes Luther is a real monster and her...Thank you El. Yes Luther is a real monster and her pain only heightened the pleasure for him. You are so right; having him as the Alpha means LOTS of wars of people opposing him and trying to get from beneath his tyranny. He's a heartless, unloving and merciless beast of a man that takes what he wants without cause for concern.<br /><br />HAHA With all the wolves hounding after that scent she is in a bit of trouble! I think the pups would be so cute!<br /><br />Thank you for reading!DaijahVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-63735278817382738722011-12-14T11:16:40.104-05:002011-12-14T11:16:40.104-05:00Luther is pure evil! So cruel! He completely enj...Luther is pure evil! So cruel! He completely enjoyed her pain! I felt so sorry for her. I had tears in my eyes. You wrote that so well, DJ!<br /><br />If Luther becomes the alpha, life will be unbearable for everyone!<br /><br />I can't wait to see Kaya's offspring! She better hurry and choose her mate before someone chooses for her.Daisies Dayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09529096430399435508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-47689592717556813662011-12-14T10:23:03.067-05:002011-12-14T10:23:03.067-05:00Luther is a vicious beast and doesn't care at ...Luther is a vicious beast and doesn't care at all about anyone. He just proved that watching this poor girl writhing in pain as he stole her innocence. It was a hard scene I know but I wanted to show the monster Luther is.<br /><br />Kaya LOL love that! Yes! They can all smell her and knows she's ready to mate but also know taking her is a HUGE no-no but like the animals they are they can't help but follow her around or sniff after her. It's an intoxicating fragrance. "When" she and Rafe get together :P should be fun.<br /><br />Your comment was just fine! I like that his character got the shock factor just not the way he attained it. (His temperament is only going to worsen).<br /><br />Thank you for reading!DaijahVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-38739398980843377332011-12-14T10:14:17.927-05:002011-12-14T10:14:17.927-05:00Wow...ok Luther is one scary motherfucker....
oh ...Wow...ok Luther is one scary motherfucker....<br /><br />oh my goodness, that was rough, and scary, and sad, so very very sad for that poor girl.<br /><br />Kaya has all the guys sniffing (lol like the pun) behind her doesn't she. <br />.<br />When she and Rafe get together finally it's going to be crazy.<br /><br />Ok so yeah the end of that chapter has shocked me too much to think clearly right now. I may be back with a better comment later. :)jazenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02791862222656796075noreply@blogger.com