tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post2590891645946945982..comments2023-12-17T13:58:42.727-05:00Comments on After Midnight: Episode 01: HuntedDaijahVhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-67764346856848768582019-05-20T14:20:46.784-04:002019-05-20T14:20:46.784-04:00Thank you and welcome to the saga! I really apprec...Thank you and welcome to the saga! I really appreciate your comment. That is really sweet of you to say. I've given thought to actually publishing but to be honest it seems like a huge hassle (sorry, Mom! She's been telling me I need to also). It just doesn't seem like the thing for me. Plus, it's a lot more fun this way. :D<br /><br />I always think when I write "How can I grab the reader's attention" and so I like starting scenes in the middle of action like that. I'm glad to hear it was well received!<br /><br />Kaya and Rafe are really fun together. And if you've continued reading, I'm sure you've found they have a love destined by the stars :)<br /><br />Thank you for reading :)DaijahVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-60775151682738989272016-07-20T22:26:49.979-04:002016-07-20T22:26:49.979-04:00I've seen this story before, but this is the f...I've seen this story before, but this is the first time I got the chance to read it. Now I wish I read it all along, because it's truly an amazing and captivating story. You are such a brilliant writer. Have you thought about professional writing? You are literally that good! I'm not yet finished with the story, but I thought I'd comment on the first chapter. I love how the story starts with Rafe running from the hunters. The fact that he's naked and covered in blood makes things more interesting lol. He's already one of my favorite characters, next to Kaya of course. They have amazing chemistry together. I kind of wish someone would make a tv show out of your story, and then Kaya and Rafe could be the romantic lead characters. DesiKnight07https://www.blogger.com/profile/18245966653874519146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-70192238016729834642014-10-31T09:28:15.229-04:002014-10-31T09:28:15.229-04:00LOL! I'm pretty sure he thought he woke up in ...LOL! I'm pretty sure he thought he woke up in the nuthouse at that point. Poor Rafe has no clue what's going on and finds himself unable to even escape these "whackjobs!"<br /><br />Thank you for reading :DDaijahVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-15129263194167239602014-10-30T13:46:18.474-04:002014-10-30T13:46:18.474-04:00Hahaha, okay, I love his expression at the end. Ep...Hahaha, okay, I love his expression at the end. Epic. I love the story already. I'm especially interested in finding out about Kaya's boy toy lol.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11690282172932677049noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-47407706375868377762012-08-17T00:04:30.756-04:002012-08-17T00:04:30.756-04:00Thank you! I always wonder about jokes I write...I...Thank you! I always wonder about jokes I write...I am never sure I am as funny on "paper" as I am in real life :PDaijahVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-91236602383974957222012-08-11T19:47:40.225-04:002012-08-11T19:47:40.225-04:00Well, here I go on another adventure! You had me c...Well, here I go on another adventure! You had me cracking up! Wonderfully done. :-)mypalsim1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08612512921461620603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-50702073766975519762012-05-31T18:14:01.878-04:002012-05-31T18:14:01.878-04:00Thank you! I like that part most of anything. I th...Thank you! I like that part most of anything. I think the picture taking though is tedious and long. I'm always looking to hire someone to do it for me :P I pay in chocolate! <br /><br />I think the opening to a story is the most important and I've learned since (eek) Desired that I like starting with an action scene. That's how We Are Stardust is as well! Stina's outburst immediately pulls you in! <br /><br />Thank you for reading :)DaijahVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-72099039281498650462012-05-31T18:01:31.044-04:002012-05-31T18:01:31.044-04:00Wow, awesome start. What an intense opening scene!...Wow, awesome start. What an intense opening scene! You really do build amazing sets, and take such great pictures.<br />And I'm so hooked into this story.yangthecathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15083940950118677312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-28473754963590055812011-12-14T18:51:09.096-05:002011-12-14T18:51:09.096-05:00I enjoy starting stories that way now. I really wa...I enjoy starting stories that way now. I really wanted to show his desperation at the start and give some sort of urgency, I'm happy that happened and it sucked you in! <br /><br />Thank you! The sets I build are painstaking but I must because I DETEST editing pictures. Rafe was not sure of what he was doing and waking up covered in blood with a bloodhound pack and two armed men chasing after him was not the ideal way to take care of a hangover; the nudity didn't help much either. <br /><br />Rafe's may have been the first but it won't be the last. There will be plenty of "package" shots :)<br /><br />HAHA It's ok, it's the perv in you :D I love it! And from one perv to another, this might be the perfect story :P There's lots of "action" in store.<br /><br />Connor and Rafe are HOT and I love the badboy. His accent just makes him even YUMMIER! Kaya has a full buffet of men to choose from and the dishes are still being cooked!<br /><br />Thank you for reading :DDaijahVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-5488169355558498292011-12-14T18:09:31.417-05:002011-12-14T18:09:31.417-05:00Oooooh I am soo loving this story!! I'm normal...Oooooh I am soo loving this story!! I'm normally not into vampires or werewolf stories but the chase scene really caught my attention. It's like watching the beginning of a movie, and I wanted to know why he was being chased. You dove right into the action, I love it!<br /><br />I also have to say that your pictures are gorgeous! I love the special effects that you added, the blood really pains a picture of the gore that Rafe just committed. It adds to the realism of the story, especially after seeing Rafe's package. lol. I don't think I've ever seen that before, but umm...I was intruiged. XD<br /><br />And may I say that Connor and Rafe are hot?? I am soooo looking forward to any love scene involving them and Kaya. And she's a werewolf!! She's beautiful. Haha look at me I'm already thinking about love scenes ;-) I love your descriptions, they really paint a picture of the setting and what's going on in the story. I also love Bane's Aussie accent.<br /><br />Wonderful start to the story, and I'm off to read Ch. 2!tommiegirl_cahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04541107908741237375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-47568153660453991032011-11-19T17:42:35.802-05:002011-11-19T17:42:35.802-05:00JM:
Kaya does pack a punch and isn't one to m...JM:<br /><br />Kaya does pack a punch and isn't one to mess with. She will definitely keep the wolves in check.<br /><br />Ha! Rafe is a hottie and I think that will cause a few problems for the pack and some of the males in particular.<br /><br />The manor is getting a makeover as the Pets EP screwed up some of the CC in there unfortunately but thank you :) I hope I can get everything worked out.<br /><br />Thank you for that and thank you for reading :)DaijahVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-44760195511487368032011-11-19T17:02:03.116-05:002011-11-19T17:02:03.116-05:00Interesting!
I'm not one for werewolves, but I...Interesting!<br />I'm not one for werewolves, but I just might enjoy this! Kaya is a lively one, I like her! The manor also looks gorgeous! If you can actually take your eyes off Rafe for a minute and take in the surroundings...<br /><br />I wonder what road this story will take us on! Great start!Jean-Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10197541538215744061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-49328712766371144962011-11-05T16:34:39.492-04:002011-11-05T16:34:39.492-04:00Qui:
True! Bane hates new people; he's as ter...Qui:<br /><br />True! Bane hates new people; he's as territorial as they come and really won't like Rafe being around and sniffing what he deems "his". Kaya just happens to fall into that category.<br /><br />Connor is her best friend and partner in crime. While she tries to keep him on the straight often times he's her rock instead. They have been friends for a very long time and that bond only deepens.<br /><br />Truly a scary thing to see but it had to be done and thank you for your editing skills :DDaijahVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-27752939116107395552011-11-05T16:22:52.734-04:002011-11-05T16:22:52.734-04:00SB:
Rafe thinks that he was just wired from the a...SB:<br /><br />Rafe thinks that he was just wired from the amount of drinking he was doing. It's easier for him to believe that he was seeing things than what really happened.<br /><br />HAHA thank you! She was cruel but thought a shot of reality was what he needed. It may work or it might just makes things worse; either way he sees that she wasn't kidding about what's out there.<br /><br />Thank you for reading :)DaijahVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-41660598248143347662011-11-05T16:02:53.701-04:002011-11-05T16:02:53.701-04:00This was very interesting! Bane likes no one but K...This was very interesting! Bane likes no one but Kaya and her being nice to Rafe seems like it's already getting under his skin.<br /><br />Connor is a cutie! I love their relationship!<br /><br />His expression at the end of this is priceless! I don't think he's going to digest that news very well. That was cool the way she showed him though!Qui.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00025642400085205427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-65161658890314977922011-11-05T15:09:10.106-04:002011-11-05T15:09:10.106-04:00I don't know how I lost track of this but I LO...I don't know how I lost track of this but I LOVE IT!! It's so lush and rich and complicated and strange! So Rafe STILL doesn't buy the werewolf reality even though he's obviously got some unusually sharp senses. That last sequence where he sees Kaya as a wolf, and she's teasing him, and he rolls his eyes, that's just perfection!S.B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15236399168777815648noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-40987367822757449882011-11-02T15:02:36.203-04:002011-11-02T15:02:36.203-04:00Thank you Karima :D
Currently redoing a few other...Thank you Karima :D<br /><br />Currently redoing a few other chapters but the 2nd will post soon!<br /><br />Thank you for reading!DaijahVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-51778146190708174282011-11-02T15:01:27.347-04:002011-11-02T15:01:27.347-04:00~ Fantastic start,intrigue right from the start!
~...~ Fantastic start,intrigue right from the start!<br />~ Love it, more when you can!(",)Aussie Karimahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00794550141380508542noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-27921229085809481242011-11-01T17:56:02.186-04:002011-11-01T17:56:02.186-04:00Kira:
Thank you! I'm happy to hear the hottie...Kira:<br /><br />Thank you! I'm happy to hear the hottie pulled you out of hiding :P I do hope the story delivers as I see it and that you will enjoy it.<br /><br />Thank you for reading :)DaijahVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-4255621384669627492011-11-01T17:52:15.931-04:002011-11-01T17:52:15.931-04:00I usually just lurk, but I had to say this looks t...I usually just lurk, but I had to say this looks to be another fascinating story. Can't wait to read more about Rafe.Kira Jayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16726113016392972598noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-71514469109436839172011-10-31T22:19:58.277-04:002011-10-31T22:19:58.277-04:00Jaz:
Thank you! A few of those are actually answe...Jaz:<br /><br />Thank you! A few of those are actually answered in Episode 2 but very excellent questions :) Rafe is curious about what all this means and has no idea what could possibly be wrong with him.<br /><br />He knows whatever Kaya is isn't something he wants any part of. And Kaya is a bit of a softy when it comes to her wolves. As Connor said, she's a sucker for a lost cause!<br /><br />Thank you again! I'm gonna really work to make it so! :DDaijahVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-12569603495358197022011-10-31T22:16:40.950-04:002011-10-31T22:16:40.950-04:00What a start!!!! So many questions, how did he ge...What a start!!!! So many questions, how did he get turned, who did he eat and how did the hunters find him to chase him?<br /><br />Rafe is a hottie. Kaya seems to have a soft spot for him at least right now.<br /><br />OMG DJ this is going to be a great story.jazenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02791862222656796075noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-49220877409122736762011-10-31T22:00:15.977-04:002011-10-31T22:00:15.977-04:00El:
Thank you!
This obviously was before the Pe...El:<br /><br />Thank you! <br /><br />This obviously was before the Pets EP and my photo editor (Quiana -- thank you) placed the wolf for me BUT lucky for her I don't have to work her to death now.<br /><br />Connor is awesome, a playboy and a jokester, he'll be much fun to work with!<br /><br />Kaya was cruel but it needed to be done :D Now we'll have to see just how Rafe adjusts to life as a lycan!<br /><br />Thank you for reading!DaijahVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873546655984283437.post-63470953309174290222011-10-31T21:55:23.942-04:002011-10-31T21:55:23.942-04:00Hooked already! Another great story, Daijah!
Con...Hooked already! Another great story, Daijah!<br /><br />Conner is super hot with those green eyes. I can't wait to get to know the characters!<br /><br />I loved the way Kaya demonstrated what they were!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com